과천외고 영어 에세이 복습: 접속어보다 문장 사이 논리를 먼저 고치기 실전문제

Our class put one plant by the window. Its leaves received afternoon light. However, the plant leaned toward the window. We did not compare its growth with other plants.

The bus arrived twelve minutes late. Draft: Consequently, all students missed the first lesson. However, Jae reached school before the bell because he had left early. No other student’s arrival time is given.

Mina removed a second example because it repeated the first without adding evidence. She used the time to identify the source of a statistic. In rehearsal, classmates understood the survey group, though they still asked how the survey question had been worded.

A school garden received more visitors after a new path opened. Several visitors reported that the wider route felt easier to use. However, the count was taken only on sunny afternoons, and no winter visits were recorded. The caretaker therefore suggested ______.